*for Suzanne
i had forgotten
how lovely
you look
in my hat;
your hair
a maniacal
auburn nest
grasping for air.
sitting on the sofa,
watching you,
snow burying our lawn,
i remember that time,
long ago,
when i played stieglitz
to your o’keeffe,
shooting you
in an abandoned ruin
off some street,
downtown mobile.
you wandered among
fallen bricks,
naked from the waist up;
your impish tits
not yet evolved
into the motherly breasts
on which i now
lay my head.
(one of those portraits,
you with hands on hips,
head held high
in a silent, defiant
showdown with god,
still hangs on the wall
above my chest-of-drawers.)
afterward,
we drove to your place,
walked into the orchard,
and made love in the grass –
the scent of apple blossoms
sweet on the wind.
perhaps,
sometime soon,
you, i, and that hat
can take a road trip
to some forgotten urban ruins,
or an abandoned orchard,
camera in hand,
and give me something else
to remember
another sixteen years
down the road.
5 comments:
'a maniacal
auburn nest
grasping for air'
- fantastic image!
thank you so much!
This was a most beautiful, romantic love poem, I really enjoyed it, your words makes me smile :)
a beautiful poem of love. honest and direct with clear and vivid imagery.
i love this.
~C - Thank you so much. Coming from you, the mistress of the love poem, that means a while lot!
Andreas - Thank you, too, for the kind words, and thank you for reading my stuff. I really appreciate it!
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